Since my plans for last weekend were ruined I decide to post what I do have. So here you go, another page.

While I enjoy the text on this page, I do not enjoy the placement. I could have thought the page out better when it came to the text.

I think the action flows well, and were it a movie it would be a funny scene, but the placement of the word bubbles is really something I need to take more into consideration when I create a page.